Henry James

Maud-Evelyn

Extracts from the author’s notebooks


Torquay, September 22nd, 1895

Make, later on, a statement of idea for treatment of Gualdo’s charming little subject of The child.




May 7th, 1898   [34 De Vere Gardens?]

[on this date is a list of ideas to remember to work on, including: ]

8. Gualdo’s story of the child retournée – the acquisition, construction (by portrait, etc. ???) of an ANCESTOR, instead of l’Enfant. The setting up of some one who must have lived: un vrai mort. Imagine old couple, liking young man: ‘You must have married our daughter.’
     ‘Your daughter?’
     ‘The one we lost. You were her fiancé or her mari.’ Imagine situation for young man (as regards some living girl) who has more or less accepted it. He succumbs to suggestion. He has sworn fidelity to a memory. He ends by believing it. He lives with the parents. They leave him their money. I see him later. He is a widower. He dies, to rejoin his wife. He leaves their fortune to the girl he doesn’t marry. 35 pages.




Lamb House, September 11th, 1900

[...] Let me say first, by the way, that I learned last month from P.B. what makes the little ‘Gualdo’ notion of ‘The child’ really, it seems to me, quite disponible to me on my own lines. They know nothing of his ever having written or published such a tale – they only meant in mentioning the thing to me at Torquay, that he had mentioned it to them. That he ever treated it, or what he made if he did, they wholly ignore – and it is moreover a question for me of a mere point de départ: that a young childless couple comes to a painter and ask him to paint them a little girl (or a child quelconque) whom they can have as their own – since they so want one and can’t come by it otherwise. My subject is what I get out of that. Several pretty little things, it seems to me. Me voilà donc libre. Bon!




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