What I had
lately
and most particularly to say of
The Coxon fund
is no less true of
The Middle Years,
first published in
Scribners magazine
(1893) that recollection mainly and most promptly associates with it
the number of times I had to do it over to make sure of it. To get it right
was to squeeze my subject into the five or six thousand words I had been
invited to make it consist of it consists, in fact should the curious
care to know, of some 5550 and I scarce perhaps recall another case,
with the
exception
I shall presently name, in which my struggle to keep compression rich, if not
better still, to keep accretions compressed, betrayed for me such community
with the anxious effort of some warden of the insane engaged at a critical
moment in making fast a victims straitjacket. The form of
The middle years
is not that of the
nouvelle,
but that of the concise anecdote;
whereas the subject treated would perhaps seem one comparatively demanding
developments if indeed, amid these mysteries,
distinctions were so absolute. (There is of course neither close nor fixed
measure of the reach of a development, which in some connexions seems almost
superfluous and then in others to represent the whole sense of the matter;
and we should doubtless speak more thoroughly by book had we some secret for
exactly tracing deflexions and returns.) However this may be, it was as an
anecdote, an anecdote only, that I was determined my little situation here
should figure; to which end my effort was of course to follow it as much as
possible from its outer edge in, rather than from its centre outward. That
fond formula, I had alas already discovered, may set as many traps in the
garden as its opposite may set in the wood; so that after boilings and
reboilings of the contents of my small cauldron, after added
pounds of salutary sugar, as numerous as those prescribed in the choicest
recipe for the thickest jam, I well remember finding the whole process and
act (which, to the exclusion of everything else, dragged itself out for a
month) one of the most expensive of its sort in which I had ever engaged.
But I recall, by good luck, no less vividly how much
finer a sweetness than any mere spooned-out saccharine dwelt in the
fascination of the questions involved. Treating a theme that
gave much in a form that, at the best, would give little, might
indeed represent a peck of troubles; yet who, none the less, beforehand, was
to pronounce with authority such and such an idea anecdotic and such and
such another developmental? One had, for the vanity of
a priori
wisdom here, only to be so constituted that to see any form of beauty, for a
particular application, proscribed or even questioned, was forthwith to
covet that form more than any other and to desire the benefit of it exactly
there. One had only to be reminded that for the effect of quick roundness
the small smooth situation, though as intense as one will, is prudently
indicated, and that for a fine complicated entangled air nothing will serve
that does nt naturally swell and bristle one had only, I
say, to be so warned off or warned on, to see forthwith no beauty for the
simple thing that should nt, and even to perversity, enrich it,
and none for the other, the comparatively intricate, that
should nt press it out as a mosaic. After which fashion the
careful craftsman would have prepared himself the special inviting treat of
scarce being able to say, at his highest infatuation, before any series,
which might be the light thing weighted and which the dense thing clarified.
The very attempt so to discriminate leaves him in fact at moments even a
little ashamed; whereby let him shirk here frankly certain of the issues
presented by the remainder of our company there being, independently
of these mystic matters, other remarks to make. Blankness overtakes me, I
confess, in connexion with the brief but concentrated
Greville Fane
that emerges, how concentrated I tried to make it
which must have appeared in
a London weekly journal
at the
beginning of the nineties; but as to which I further retain only
a dim warm pleasantness as of old
Kensington summer hours.
I re-read, ever
so kindly, to the promotion of a mild aftertaste that of a certain
feverish pressure, in a cool north room resorted to in heavy London Augusts,
with stray, rare echoes of the town, beyond near roofs and chimneys, making
harmless detonations, and with the perception, over my page, as I felt poor
Greville grow, that her scant record, to be anything at all, would have to
be a minor miracle of foreshortening. For here is exactly an illustrative
case: the subject, in this little composition, is developmental
enough, while the form has to make the anecdotic concession; and yet who
shall say that for the right effect of a small harmony the fusion has
failed? We desire doubtless a more detailed notation of the behaviour of the
son and daughter, and yet had I believed the right effect missed
Greville Fane
would nt have figured here.
Nothing, by the same stroke, could well have been
condemned to struggle more for that harmony than
The abasement of the Northmores
and
The tree of knowledge:
the idea in these examples (1900) being developmental with a vengeance and
the need of an apparent ease and a general congruity having to enforce none
the less as on behalf of some victim of the income-tax who would
minimise his return an almost heroic dissimulation of
capital. These things, especially the former, are novels intensely
compressed, and with that character in them yet keeping at bay, under stress
of their failing else to be good short stories, any air of mutilation. They
had had to be good short stories in order to earn, however precariously,
their possible wage and appear so certain was it that there
would be no appearance, and consequently no wage, for them as frank and brave
nouvelles.
They could but conceal the fact that they were nouvelles;
they could but masquerade as little anecdotes. I include them here by reason
of that successful, that achieved and consummate as it strikes me
duplicity: which, however, I may add, was in the event to avail them little
since they were to find nowhere, the unfortunates,
hospitality and the reward of their effort. It is to
The tree of knowledge
I referred just above, I may further mention, as the production that had
cost me, for keeping it down, even a greater number of full
revolutions of the merciless screw
than
The middle years.
On behalf also of this member of the group, as well as for
The author of Beltraffio,
I recover exceptionally the sense of the grain of suggestion, the tiny
air-blown particle. In presence of a small interesting example of a
young artist
long dead, and whom I had yet briefly seen and was to remember with kindness,
a friend had made, thanks to a still greater personal knowledge of him and of
his quasi-conspicuous father, likewise an artist, one of those brief remarks
that the dramatist feels as fertilising. And then, the
lady
I quote had said in allusion to certain troubled first steps of the
young mans career, to complications of consciousness that had made his
early death perhaps less strange and less lamentable, even though
superficially more tragic; and then he had found his father out,
artistically: having grown up in so happy a personal relation with him only
to feel, at last, quite awfully, that he did nt and
could nt believe in him. That fell on ones ear of
course only to prompt the inward cry: How can there possibly
not be all sorts of good things in it? Just so for
The author of Beltraffio
long before this and some time before the first appearance of the
tale in
The English illustrated magazine
(1884): it had been said to me of an
eminent author,
these several years
dead and on some of the embarrassments of whose life and character a common
friend was enlarging: Add to them all, moreover, that his wife objects
intensely to what he writes. She cant bear it (as you can for that
matter rather easily conceive) and that naturally creates a
tension! There had come the air-blown grain which,
lodged in a handful of kindly earth, was to produce the story of Mark
Ambient.
Elliptic, I allow, and much of a skipping of stages, so
bare an account of such performances; yet with the constitutive process for
each idea quite sufficiently noted by my having had, always, only to say to
myself sharply enough:
Dramatise it, dramatise it! That answered, in the connexion,
always, all my questions that provided for all my fun.
The two tales I have named but represent therefore their respective grains
of seed dramatically handled. In the case of
Broken wings
(1900), however, I but see to-day the produced result I fail to
disinter again the buried germ. Little matters it, no doubt, that I recall
as operative here the brush of no winged word; for when had I been, as a
fellow scribbler, closed to the general admonition of such adventures as
poor Mrs Harveys, the elegant representative of literature at
Mundham? to such predicaments as Stuart Straiths, gallant
victim of the same hospitality and with the same confirmed ache beneath his
white waistcoat? The appeal of mature purveyors obliged, in the very
interest of their presumed, their marketable, freshness, to dissimulate the
grim realities of shrunken custom, the felt chill of a lower
professional temperature any old note-book would show that
laid away
as a tragic value not much less tenderly than some small plucked
flower of association left between the leaves for pressing. What had
happened here, visibly, was that the value had had to wait long to become
active. Dramatise, dramatise, dramatise! had been just there
more of an easy admonition than of a ready feat; the case for dramatisation
was somehow not whole. Under some forgotten touch, however, at its right
hour, it was to round itself. What the single situation lacked the
pair of situations would supply there was drama enough, with
economy, from the moment sad companions, looking each other, with their
identities of pluck and despair, a little hard in the face, should confess
each to the other, relievingly, what they kept from every one else. With the
right encounter and the right surprise, that is with the right persons,
postulated, the relief, if in the right degree exquisite, might be the drama
and the right persons, in fine, to make it exquisite, were Stuart
Straith and Mrs Harvey. There remains
The great good place
(1900) to the spirit of which, however, it strikes me, any gloss or
comment would be a tactless challenge. It embodies a calculated effect, and
to
plunge into it, I find, even for a beguiled glance a course I indeed
recommend is to have left all else outside. There then my indications
must wait.
The origin of
Paste
is rather more expressible, since it was to consist but of the ingenious
thought of transposing the terms of one of Guy de
Maupassants
admirable
contes.
In
La parure
a poor young woman, under social stress, the need of making an
appearance on an important occasion, borrows from an old school friend, now
much richer than herself, a pearl necklace which she has the appalling
misfortune to lose by some mischance never afterwards cleared up. Her life
and her pride, as well as her husbands with them, become subject, from
the hour of the awful accident, to the redemption of their debt; which,
effort by effort, sacrifice by sacrifice, franc by franc, with specious
pretexts, excuses, a rage of desperate explanation of their failure to
restore the missing object, they finally obliterate all to find that
their whole consciousness and life have been convulsed and deformed in vain,
that the pearls were but highly artful imitation and that their
passionate penance has ruined them for nothing. It seemed harmless sport
simply to turn that situation round to shift, in other words, the
ground of the horrid mistake, making this a matter not of a false treasure
supposed to be true and precious, but of a real treasure supposed to be
false and hollow: though a new little drama, a new setting for
my pearls and as different as possible from the other
had of course withal to be found.
Europe,
which is of 1899, when it appeared in
Scribners magazine,
conspicuously fails, on the other hand, to disown its parentage; so
distinct has its genesis remained to me. I had preserved for
long years an impression of an early time, a visit, in a sedate American
city for there were such cities then to an
ancient lady
whose talk, whose allusions and relics and spoils and mementoes and
credentials, so to call them, bore upon a triumphant sojourn in Europe, long
years before, in the hey-day of the high scholarly reputation of her
husband, a dim displaced superseded celebrity at the time of my own
observation. They
had been much made
of
,
he and she, at various foreign centres of
polite learning, and above all in the England of early Victorian days; and
my hostess had lived ever since on the name and fame of it; a treasure of
legend and anecdote laid up against the comparatively lean half-century, or
whatever, that was to follow. For myself even, after this, a good slice of
such a period had elapsed; yet with my continuing to believe that fond
memory would still somehow be justified of this scrap too, along with so
many others: the unextinguished sense of the temperature of the January
morning on which the little Sunday breakfast-party, at half-past nine across
the snow, had met to the music of a chilly ghostly kindly tinkle; that of
the roomful of cherished echoes and of framed and glazed, presented and
autographed and thumb-marked mementoes the wealth of which was
somehow explained (this was part of the legend) by the ancient, the at last
almost prehistoric, glory of like matutinal hours, type and model of the
emulous shrunken actual.
The justification I awaited, however, only came much
later, on my catching some tender mention of certain admirable ladies,
sisters and spinsters under the maternal roof, for whom the century was
ebbing without remedy brought to their eminent misfortune (such a ground of
sympathy always in the good old American days when the touching
case was still possible) of not having been to Europe.
Exceptionally prepared by culture for going, they yet could nt
leave their immemorial mother, the headspring, precisely, of that grace in
them, who on the occasion of each proposed start announced her approaching
end only to postpone it again after the plan was dished and the
flight relinquished. So the century ebbed, and so Europe altered for
the worse and so perhaps even a little did the sisters who sat in
bondage; only so did nt at all the immemorial, the
inextinguishable, the eternal mother. Striking to the last degree, I
thought, that obscure, or at least that muffled, tragedy, which had the
further interest of giving me on the spot a setting for my own so long
uninserted gem and of enabling me to bring out with maximum confidence my
inveterate
Dramatise! Make this one with such projection as
you are free to permit yourself of the brooding parent in the other
case, I duly remarked, and the whole thing falls together; the
paradise the good sisters are apparently never to attain becoming by this
conversion just the social cake on which they have always been fed and that
has so notoriously opened their appetite. Or something of that sort. I
recognise that I so but express here the plot of my tale as it
stands; except for so far as my formula, something of that sort,
was to make the case bristle with as many vivid values, with as thick and
yet as clear a little complexity of interest, as possible. The merit of the
thing is in the feat, once more, of the transfusion; the receptacle (of
form) being so exiguous, the brevity imposed so great. I undertook the
brevity, so often undertaken on a like scale before, and again arrived at it
by the innumerable repeated chemical reductions and condensations that tend
to make of the very short story, as I risk again noting, one of the
costliest, even if, like the hard, shining sonnet, one of the most
indestructible, forms of composition in general use. I accepted the rigour
of its having, all sternly, in this case, to treat so many of its most
appealing values as waste; and I now seek my comfort perforce in the mere
exhibited result, the union of whatever fulness with whatever clearness.
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